Saturday, September 22, 2012

Bar Hope?

OK, with this story, I have only writing a quick beginnig. like the main picture at the top of the blog, I have drawn pictures for this story. but i wrote out bits of it and summed it up quickly. so if you read the back of the book, it might show this.
((PS I DO NOT own this photo.))



Story line.

My name is Natalie Cornain and I just turned 17. My life had been like any other; I was born and raised in the city. I have one older brother named Jeremy, Who is four years older than me. A mother and Father, who I couldn’t love more. They were always there for me and never left me alone. My best friend, Lacy Grace, was always by my side. We seemed to always be together, and never went a day without contact it seemed. Yes, my life couldn’t be happier. But…the day I turned 17, my life took a turn for the worst. On the morning of my birthday, January 20th, I stepped into my high school classroom for no, not a birthday surprise, but more like a nightmare. That morning, I woke up with excitement, hoping to make this a great day. I rushed to school, which wasn’t far from home, and made it earlier than normal. And there, in the classroom was my best friend, Lacy, and 4 other girls from our class. Those where the 4 girls who had been tormenting me sense I entered high school. Well, mostly everyone tormented me, except for Lacy that is. They were huddled around my desk. I heard something come out of my best friend’s mouth. “Uhg, this pig will never learn! Why does she still think after all these years that were still friends?” I watched her and the other girls around the desk together and listening in closely. “So how will we get the teachers to find it huh?” asked one girl. “I have a plan for that.” Said another. After downright harsh comments spoken about me, the girls leave for the bathroom. Once they do, I make my way to my desk. Inside, they had hidden different types of drugs. Most that I didn’t even know of. Of cores, I didn’t really know what to do about it, so I skipped class for the day.  This became a big mistake. Turns out I didn’t have to be there to get in trouble for something like that. My teacher went right to our house that afternoon and raised cow at my parents for raising me this way. Or, so I heard. I wasn’t there. I was in quite a brawl with my brother over the phone. “Why did you leave?! It’s just a silly fight right?!” I screamed louder than I have in a while at him. “No Nat, not this time. I can’t take it anymore! I’m sorry.” Why did my big brother leave so easily? While I was away at school, well, skipping classes. My parents got in quite a fight with my big brother. I don’t even know what it was about, what I heard there was actually fist fighting involved. I don’t know where he went, or anything, I just know that he won’t answer when I try to call him back. I stayed out all night that night. Not really doing anything, just sitting on sidewalk benches, and walking through the shopping center, things like that. I made up my mind to head home. By then it was already 4 in the morning, yet I wasn’t even tired. I took a bus back to my house, and got off were I normally do. I prepared myself for quite the scolding from my dad after this, but it was ok I guess. I just wanted everything to stop. And it did…I can’t say in much detail, but that night could never have changed me more. You know, you never think about it but, it could happen to you too. Those stories in the paper about people dying, being killed by another. Maybe not you personally, but maybe…your family. I found my parents, sprawled out across our front pouch. Dead and bleeping. The worst time I have ever been sick was back in middle school, when I caught the worst stomach virus. Compared to then, I threw up 5 times more. I don’t remember it, but apparently I screamed. It woke the Nabors and they called 911 after rushing to see what was going on. All I remember was waking up in the hospital. I attended their funeral, but I couldn’t seem to cry. I couldn’t feel anything, and can’t tell you why, because I myself have no idea. I heard the police say they still don’t know who did it, and apparently there aren’t any good clues that were left. The police couldn’t contact my brother because he was already trying not to be found. I heard somewhere that he left the state. Some might think my brother did it, but I don’t think so at all. My Aunt and uncle are my only relatives left if you can believe it. They have no kids, and I have no grandparents anymore. My mother had no siblings. This was my father’s brother and his wife. I went to stay with them, not hopeing for anything. They seemed nice at first, but I began to wonder if they were alright in the head. It sometimes seemed as though they forgot I lived with them. That or, they did it on purpose, because when they moved away they left a note on the door saying to take care of myself and here is 50 bucks. I had nowhere to go, and no one to turn to. Yet, I still clung to my little bit of hope that my father always said that there was. “No matter what, there is always some kind of hope, you just have to find it.” He used to say. Luckily, I got a nighttime job at a gas station. I really hated it, but what else could I do at this point.

((in this story a man saves her and brings her to stay with him and his two “friends”. Long story short, the guy owns a bar. One of his workers is an ex gang leader the other an ex pro gambler. Together they run the most popular bar in the city and work together to find the girl’s parents killer. Lots of cool stuff happened. This is just this JIST.))

Cursed Knight

This isnt a writen story, and it still needs alot of work to make it purfect and interesting. its JUST the JIST of the story line.






((Other story line: A young boy who is cursed by a witch. The setting is medieval times. Knights, castles, worriers and stuff. A Young wealthy famer’s son dreamed of being a knight, but when he was very young, a curse was placed upon him. “He shall never be able to kill nor wound any living thing. For this curse will make it impossible.” S’all fine and good for any normal person who wouldn’t dream of killing. But for a boy dreaming of being a knight, fighting for the kingdom…it was the worst thing to be cursed with. The boy tried for years and years to brake said curse, but to no avail. He suffered for years with it, but soon, as a young teen, he finally gave up. Years later, he was interning adulthood and would be turning 20 soon. He was working under a blacksmith who made all the weapons for the knights of the kingdom. The dream still fluttered in his heart, but he couldn’t do anything about it. One day, he meets a girl who comes by the blacksmiths shop. A tall skinny girl with bright green eyes and long brown hair. She handed over a bow and asked for the boy to fix it. The boss was away and she needed it asap. So, the boy fixed it. {the boy, the main boy, Is tall and skinny, has black hair and dark eyes.} after handing it to the girl, she smiles and asks him to join her in her hunting indever. The boy sighs and declines with no hesitation. But she doesn’t give up. She begs until he says yes. They go off over into the woods and she sets up an apple. (The boy can shoot things; he just can’t kill or harm LIVING things.) She tries to shoot it but fails slightly. She hands the bow over and the boy shoots it dead on with almost no change of position or expression. The girl is so amazing and gives him other things to shoot. Further and further away and he never misses. The girl beams with joy and wipes off her head cover, reviling a crown. “You must come to the castle and train to be my knight!”

Of cores, the boy cannot do such, because of his curse. But he goes to the castle with the princesses, and does what she tells him to. his plan was to stay low and avoid having to kill something. However, being a knight, battle will come. His curse would not even let him lay a blow on a living thing. So combat with others had to be avoided as well. {when he does try and hurt, or kill, a force bounces his weapon away, and he Is unable to strike.} trouble is to come. And the boy meets many people. In the future the princess finds out and another knight also finds out and the work together to brake it so his dream of being a knight to come true.)

((I do not own this picture at the top.))

Kidnapped for now





OK this is only the biggining of a totaly different story. its like, the start of the story. nothing really. its kinda old but my writing was pritty good in it.

                                                                 
Chapter 1  
                                     Kidnap.

 

         I remember even now bits and pieces of that dark day in my small town. It was a cold winter Saturday morning, and a surprising snow fall had begun. I remember begging at my mother’s feet to allow me the wonders of playing with the strange white stuff that began to pile up at the front door. I remember the sad smile she gave me when she told me that I needed to remain inside. Back then, I didn’t understand why she didn’t privilege me to roam the outdoors. But now I know, for back then it was not safe in our small town. Word of expert kidnappers was always the talk that was heard, mainly the old people who would sit in the small coffee shops with no worries at all. Fresh missing posters were hung everyday of a new missing child, normally under the age of 6. Local police and many from out of the area were always patrolling around, stalking suspicious people and posted at almost every store and sidewalk corner. Though even still it must have been useless, because every day would pass and a new missing persons report was added.

             At my young age of 4, I didn’t care nor understand what was going on, even if someone tried to explain it. All I wanted was to run outside and build my first snow man, and slide down the tiny lump of land in our front yard. But the worries of my mother were holding me back, and I was ready to rebel against this injustice. My older brother, Michel, was 8 at the time, who with a reputation of being sneaky, had thought of a plan. Michel was a tall skinny kid with a short, shaved back hair doo that made him look like GI joy. His eyes were a bright green color and his smile shone brighter than any star I had ever seen. He was my favorite person in the world, and I looked up to him for every little thing he did. Michel’s plan that day was, extremely simple now that I think back, but at the time seemed so ingenious even the great cat in the hat couldn’t have done better! His plan was to run outside real fast, play with all the snow, then come back in without Mother finding out. Surely it was fool proof, we must have thought. But as we conducted our plan, I felt something around me. A pressure that I couldn’t explained to anyone. My brother and I were in the phase of playing with all the snow, trying very hard to get as much joy time in as possible. I’ll never forget that moment. The one where I got to close and everything changed. And surely, it changed my brother’s life as well, for I could see it in his eyes when I was snatched all too quickly from my own very front yard. The shock, horror and fear covered his face like I had never seen before. And for that being the last thing I saw from my brother, it would forever haunt me.
((This story is the story of a girl and two boys. They are kidnapped with many other children and brought to a lab under the ground. there are many experiments that go on down there are they are the test subjects. Most of the children don’t make it, but these three do. They form a bond and stick together. soon, one of the scientists takes notice of the threes slight rebellion towards the scientists. So he takes them under his wing, and plots to destroy the lab. But the kids don’t know that he is only using them. They grow up and the attack on the lab happens when they are 16 ish. They burn the place and kill all the scientists there. Few of the children make it out alive. The three kids, the girl and two boys get out with the professor. He laughs evilly and reveals his true colors to the kids. Anyways, one of the boys turns evil and begins to blame the world for what happened. They all have gained special abilities because of the science tests that happened before.))

((I DO NOT own this picture))