Sunday, February 14, 2021


 This "story" is from back in 2007 when I was about 13 years old. I have dyslexia, so my writing seems more like I am younger than 13. But enjoy, because oh my goodness this makes me laugh so much. 


 SEQ CHAPTER \h \r 1                                                 chapter 1 

                                    Discovering the Powers  




"Hay Keith, the school is having a school parte tomorrow, do you think you will be able 

to come Sure Mr. Peter, if it is ok with my parents "Ok." Sade Mr. Peter.  Mr. Peter 

was the schools principal, he loved Keith like a sone. Keith loved him just as much. 

Meanwhile Kriss was getting some water He hade jest herd about the parte tomorrow

and was planing to go, wen kegan walked up. "Hey Kriss, what’s up?"  

"Not much, Hay, Have you herd about that party tomorrow Sade Kriss. "Ye, But

my big brother is going to be Thar.'' ''you men Kevin, I thought he was in 8th grade.'' Sade kriss. 

''He is, this school is 4th threw 8th.'' ''O ye'' Sed kriss. Not to fare away Korp was doing his

 homework in the library wen too bullies, Zach fowl and Jacob Tanner came up to him. 

''You can't be her geack this is are libraries'' Sed Jacob. there is no rule that sess that this 

is your library.'' Sed Korp. ''Im gana ring your skinny neck'' Sed Jacob as he stared

Korp in the Eyes. Suddenly Korp's Glaces trend a lite blue color and 2 blue swirls came

out of Korps eyes to Jackobs eyes. Jackobs did not move. Korp was Shocked at what hade 

happened. He ckwickly got up and ran will Zach was destructed at the site of Jackobs not moving

Korp ran down the hall and jumped in to the janitor closet.  After School was over Kevin  

 went to get some paper towels for the boys bathroom when he opened the closet all he saw was

to ronde blue eyes so he ckwickly trend on the lite and sawl korp. ''who are you?'' Sed Korp. "Im 

Kevin, hwo are you?" ''Im Korp." "What are you doing in her with the lite off? Sade Kevin as he 

looked for the paper towels. "I did something weird to another boy." " Like what?" Sed Kevin. " Like 

hipmatizing him." "WHAT!'' Sade Kevin. "I hade no idea that was going to happen Sade Korp.

"Thats just weird Korp." "Ahh there they are. Man they are on the top shelf." Sade Kevin

as he tried to reach them. Suddenly Kevin’s arms grew longer and he grabbed the paper towels and then

 they shrunk to there normal sise. Still silence struck the Closet as Kevin and Korps moths dropped.

"Did you see that or was it Just me?" Sade Kevin. "I saw it plane as day." Sade Korp. Kevin and Korp

darted out of the closet throwing the paper towels all over the place. Then they ran rite into Kelly the Most

popular girl in the hole school and knocked her down. "O Im so sarey." Sade Kevin has he and Korp 

 helped her up."Wiy in the world were you 2 running so fast?" Asked Kelly as she dusted herself off. "We Just 

Fond out that ......" Korp quickly coffered Kevin’s mouth. "That we ......umm.......fond the paper towels for the

 boys bathroom Sade Korp. Kevin trend and gave Korp a face. "Wow, that’s something allrite."

Sade Kelly kind of confused. "Well I half to go. It was nice meting you."Sade Kelly." Nice seeing 

you." Sed Kevin with a dreamy smile. "Nice seeing you?" Sade Korp. "Ye Iv Known Kelly sins 4th grade 

Sade Kevin with a big smile. "So Korp what in the world goes on in that hed of yours?" Sade Kevin wile he put 

his arm over Korps shoulders. “ What do you mene?" Sade Korp with confusion in his eyes. "Well like, we fond the 

paper towels for the boys bathroom Sade Kevin with a squeaky voce. "I Sed that?" Qweshtend 

Korp. "Yep you Sed that rite in front of Kelly Colins, and may I remind you my simple minded friend, she is the most

popular girl in the school." Sade Kevin with a English accent. The next day the hole school gathered in the baseball filed

 for the party. Thar was food, games, shows and music. Keith Kriss and Kegan went together. Kevin invited Korp to go 

with him to the party. "Hy Kegan." "O its just you Kevin Sade Kegan."Hay Kegan this is Korp." Sade Kevin pointing

 to Korp. "Hi Korp, this is Kriss and Keith Sade Kegan pointing to Kriss and Keith. " Hay is that cool all are names 

start with Ks." Sade Kriss." Yee." Sade Keith. "Trust me you give don’t no weird till you see it." Kevin Sed with a smile. 

     "What in the world are you to talking abot?" Sade Kegan kind of confused. "O nothing Sade Kevin. Meanwhile at 

the Burgers stand Krissy a red headed tom boy was cooking Burgers, a girl walked up to the stand. "Eaxscus me I need 

a Bergers plese." The  girl sade.  "Ok is that all?" Sade Krissy. "Well yes, this is a berger stand." She sade with a smarty 

vous. " O so sare what I mene is wat do you want to drink?" Sade Krissy. "O yes, a coca-cole plese." "Allrite." Krissy fisked

the hamberger and got a coca-cole and handed it to the girl. "thar you go, is thar eney thing eles I can get you?"  sade Krissy.

"Yes, can you open this can?" Krissy opened the can then wen she handed it back to the girl Krissy acksadintly spiled it all 

over the girl."YOU STUPED RED HED!"  sade the girl. "What did you call me?" Sade Krissy. "I CALLED YOU A STUPED 

DUM RED HED!" This made Krissy vare mad, sudenly Krissy's hare ternd to fier and her eyes ternd lite bluo Krissy jumped 

up onto the tabul and fier came out her hands.The girl screemed and ran away. Krissy calmed down and was so shocked. 

She jumped of the tabul and ran behind the blowup slide. brething dep she looked at her hans and thay wer not bernd she 

felt her hare it was not even hot."Wat was that?" Krissy thout. Rite above her Keath was nexed to slide down the slid. wen it 

was his tern he jumed to hiy and fell over the side evreone scemmed. Keath coverd his eyes then evreone stoped screming

he slowly opend his eyes and he was floting in the aer he slowly let himself to the growed everone was silent. Keath ran behind

the slide and bumed into Krissy. "O sare ill leve." Sade Keth. " No you can stay." Sade Krissy grabing his aram. " So whats your

name?" Qwestchand Keath. "Im Krissy. Whats yours?" "Keath." "So Krissy Wiy are you hiding back her?"  Sade Keath. "Well 

I allmost bernd a girls hed of with the fier from my hands." Sade Krissy. "I can belive you cas I jist flowted in the ara  ." Sade Keath.

"Thats awsome!" ." Well I ges that mens that you can fliy and I can scwert fier out of my hans." Sade Krissy." yep, Im gana tell my frins.

" Sade Keath. "Can I go with you?" Sade Krissy. "Sher." Sade Keath. Wile thay wer walking thay sall the gient Ray Holbert stachoo 

being put up. It took 43 men to holed it from falling.then 11 men sliped on som mud and the stachoo Started to fall peple got out of the 

way but kegan was rite under it and threw his hans in the ara  and closed his eyes. Sudenly the stachoo was jist being heled bye Kegan 

Kegan opend his eyes to see if the stachoo had killed him.He was shocked to see he was the one holding it up. The 43 men came and 

strugaled to push it away. Wen the stachoo was in place evereone looked at Kegan. Kegan smield and ran rite into Keath and Krissy 

"Hi giz, did you see what I did?" Sade Kegan. "Yes.and your not the only one. Kegan this is Krissy she can sqwert  fier out of her hands."

 Sade Keath. " He can fliy." Sade Krissy ponting to Keath. "Relly.Thats awsom lets go tell Keven!" Sade Kegan. as thay got to the cofy 

stand  kelly was giting some cofey." O man this drink is hot." Sade Kelly. So she heled her hand out and drew sqwars in the skiy thin

the sqwars ternd to ice and ploped rite in her cup."Ahh.....thats mor like it ." Sade Kelly. Krissy,Keath and Kegan ran to her tabul."Hay 

that was awsom how did you do that?" Sade Keath. "Esey Iv allwas ben abel to do that." Sade Kelly.  "Well we jist fond out that we have 

powers." Sade Krissy with wide eyes. " O thats cool. Well I havent allwas benabel to do that, I fond out 3 yers ago at my friens howes."

Sade Kelly."Hy we could start a super hero team. Lets go tell your brother Kegan." Sade Keath. "Ok." Sade Kegan. "Can I com to?" Sade 

Kelly. "Sher." Sade Keath. As Keath, Krissy, Kegan and Kelly wer walking thay saw Kriss playing the donkin bueth and he hade jist ran 

out of sacks, so he looked at the targat then something amazing hapend. 2 red lazers came out his eyes and hit the target. "WOW!" 

Scremed Kriss. He ran up to Keath." Keath, did you see that! I jist shot lasers out my eyes!" Scremed Kris. "Yep, and I can fliy and Kegan

is rely srong and Kelly can creat ice and this is Krissy and she can sqwert fier out her hands." Sade Keath.  "Awsom!" Scremed Kriss. 

At the stage Lilean Muckray was singing her  last song for the day. Keven and Korp where on the therd row of sets. When Lilean started

to fall the crowed stued up and then Keven reched his arem growe longed and Caht Lilean from falling of the stage. Evere one stoped waht

thay wer doing and stard at Keven. Keven litly let Lilean to the growed and his arem cam to his normul sise."Korp, lets go." Keven wisped.

"Good ide." Korp wisberd back. Thay darted to the other part of the feld. People from everwar started to Chase them. Til Keven and Korp wer

out of site. "Hay Keven thars your brother Kegan." Sade Korp pounting to Kegan. "Ye, and hes with Kelly Colins."  Sade Keven kind of shocked. 

So he and Korp ran to Kegan, krissy, Kris, Keath, and Kelly. "Hay Kegan, Kris, Keath, Kelly," Sade Kevin with a big smiel on his face. 

" Hay Kevin, this is Krissy, She is ower new friend.Krissy, this is my brother Kevin." Sade Kegan. 

"Hi Krissy, this is Korp. Hes jist werd." Wisped Kevin. "So whats up with you gise?" Asked Kevin. "Well I allmost berd a giels hed of Keath 

fell of the blowup slid and caot himself in the ara, Kris won a donkin booth with lazerbeme eyes, Kegan caot a gient stacho from ckrushing him,

and Kelly put ice in her cofy. Other than that, not much."  Kevin and Korps moths droped after Krissy sade that." So what your tring to say is 

yall have powers?" Asked Korp. Thay all noded. "Yep thats prety much it." Sade Keath with a smiel. "This is awsome So do we, me and Korp have

powers to!" Scremed Kevin. "What kind of powers?" Asked Kelly. "Well..... I have some streche thing and Korp has some kind of hipnotizing thing."

Stuted Kevin. "Hay we sholed start a super herow thing." Sade Keath. "Ye we would call it......umm.....Kris and Gang!" Recwested Kris. " No, We

Shold Call it K,K,K,K,K,K,K." Sade Kegan. "I think we nede to whate befor we start cas it took me months befor i could control my powers." Recwested

Kelly. "Ye I think we should do that." Sade Kevin. "Ye that will be good." Sade Keath. So evere one agred to what befor thay

could save the werls. "Ok we can meat at my hows for some lesens." Sade Kelly.  So eveone went home.   





                                                                        Capter 2 

                                                                Lerning the Powers    




The nexed day Kevin, Kegan, Korp, Keath, Krissy, Kris, and Kelly all waled to school together whin Zach Fawell and Jackob 

Tanner waled up to thim. "Hi Korp I think its time to ring you'r neck." Sade Jackob. "Do you want me to do what i did to you 

lasted time Jackob?" Askted Korp. "O no you wont cas this time Iv got somthing aginsed you." Sade Jackob. "Hi Kelly you 

want to hang out after school?" Asked Zach. "Hi Zach and no thanks im having friens over today." Sade Kelly with a prowed 

look in her eye. "You dont want to hang ot with these people do you Kelly?" Asked Jackob. "Akshawaly I do." Looking at her

new friens. "Ok thin, well I can still kill this one!" Sade Jackob wile picking Korp up by the shert. "No you wont Jackob Tanner!"

Scremed Kelly. "O, and wie not?" Qweshtchand Jackob. "Becas I sade so." Sade Kelly. So she droped her book bag on the

growed and lifted her hands.The wend started to pick up and snow came out her hands and ternd into ice. Jackob droped Korp

and stud infront of Kelly. Sudinly His eyes ternd black as nigh and he slowly lifted his hands and the erth started to rise soon 

he hade lifted Kelly up on a montan. Kelly jumed off the and charged towed Jackob. Her hands lifted in the ara and a ice tornado

went all arond Zach and Jackob til thay wer in the ara.  "That was awsome!" Scremed Kevin as he ran to congragulat her. 

" Sooner or later you will beabel to do that." Sade Kelly.  On the way to school Kelly droped Zach and Jackob in theriver. 

"Hay wiy did you do that?" Scremed Zach and Jackob. Kelly, Kevin, Korp, Kegan, Keath, Krissy and Kris jist ran away. Leving 

Zach and Jackob wet and cold by the river. Whin thay got to school Kegan, Keath and Kris whint to thar clases, Kelly, Krissy, 

Korp and Kevin went to thars.  "Good morning Keath howe are you today?" Ascked Mr. Peter.  "O hi Mr 

Peter im haveing a werd day." Sade Keath kind of tierd like.  "Well ill let you cut clases to come and slepe in my ofic." 

Sade Mr.Peter with a big smiel. "Ok thanks." Sade Keath.  "Wow Keath the prinsibal lets you skip clases." Sade Kris.  "Yep." 

Anserd Keath. Menwiel Kevin, Korp,Krissy and Kelly were walking in the hall and spated a kid in a clas room steling something from 

the teches drore. "Giz look." Sade Krissy ponting at the dude. "Hay Korp get him to look you in the eye so you cane hipnotiz him." Sade Kevin. "How am 

I gana get him to look me in the eyes?" Asked Korp. "Well think of somethin, and you mite want to herey." Sade Krissy. "I have a ide." 

Sade Kelly. Kelly put her face on the windo on the dor and sade. "Yoo hoo,hover here." The dud ternd and looked Kelly in the eye kind of confused like. 

" Hi can you look this giy in the eyes?" Asked Kelly with a prowed look on her face. "Whi do you want me to do that?" Asked 

the giy in the room. "Cas win I tell you to do something you do it, you no its that esey!" Sade Kelly. So the giy looked Korp in 

the eyes. Sudinly Korps glases ternd a lite bluo coler and the to bluo swerls came ot of Korps eyes in to the boys eyes. The 

boy was frozen. "Now tell him what to do Korp." Sade Kelly. "Ok, unlock this dore and put back what you took from that dror." 

Sed Korp. So the dude unlocked the dor and put back what he took out of the dror. "That was awsome!" Scremed Kevin.   

As thay interd the room the dude was starting to wake up. "Giz hes waking up!" Scremed Krissy. "Korp how long dos that normaly

last?" Ascked Kelly. "I ges not long." Anserd Korp. "Lets lock him in the closet and go tell the prinsibal what he was doing." Sade Kevin. 

So Korp Kelly Kevin and Krissy all stuffed him in the closet and locked the door. Prinsibal Peter waled by thim rite after thay stufed him in

the closet. "Mr.Peter we cote a giy steling from the techers desk." Sade Kevin. "Rely, ware is he?" Asked Mr. Peter. "Hes in the closet." 

Sade Kelly."The closet, what is he doing in thar!" Scremed Mr. Peter runing in the room to open the closet. Mr. Peter swong the closet dor open

and the dude fell on the flor in front of him. "WHAT WER YALL THINKING. Wiy did you lock him up?" Shoted Mr. Peter. "He was steling from 

that desk." Sade Kelly ponting to the desk. Mr. Peter frowed and stard Kelly in the eye. "Kids, I sent him to come pick up some paper werk in 

here for me." Sade Mr. Peter. "O well we thot he was stelling something." Sade Krissy. "Kids come to my ofic now!" Sade Mr. Peter Ponting to the dor.

Whin thay got to his ofic and thay sat on a long ckowch. "Lisen, it was nice that you thot that he was doing rong and you trid to stop him, but nexed time

jist com and tell me. Ok."  Sade Mr.Peter. "Ok, So are you leting us of with aworning?" Asked Kelly. "Well Im leting thim of with a worning but not you." 

Sade Mr. Peter. Kelly Frowed. "What, Wiy?"  "Becas this is not the ferst time this has hapend with you." Sade Mr. Peter. "What do you mena?" Asked Kelly.

"Well like the time you thot that a boy went into the girls bathroom so you snuck in thare and ternd the lite of and bete him up, thin you fond out that it was

a girl with a hood over her hed." Sade Mr. Peter. "O yeee..... But that was 1 time you can let this one slid to." Sade Kelly. "No that wasent the only tme. do

 you remember the time you thot that new boy was your x boy friend, and you were relly made at you x boy friend so you went up to him 

and punched him in the face." Sade Mr. Peter. "O ha, that was so funy, but I dident men to hert him, jist my x." Sade Kelly. "Kevin Krissy Korp,

yall can go, and Kelly you come back after school for detinchan." Sade Mr. Peter. Kelly got up and went to clas. Kelly finely cote up with Krissy

Korp and Kevin. "Hi giz, sare I got you in trobel." Sade Kelly. "Its ok, it wasent all your falt." Sade Kevin. "Ye we thot he was steling to." Sade Krissy. Krisy and Korp whent to there clas. Kevin and Kelly whent to tharers.  

 

Tuesday, January 28, 2014

Dorothy Wrights Story (Side character story from my main story THORN)

 (Someone may not understand some things because of details that
concern my main story. such as NOTE, Wheelers, stuff like that,
who Dorothy is in my story. shes more of a side character.)




   Ding dong.
“Yes?” Asked a voice from behind the door.
“Yes, Miss Hawkins? I’m with the paranormal investigations organization, NOTE, of the state. We got a call about strange things going on around your home?” A man’s voice gently spoke.
The door opened with a click and a small older woman with bushy gray hair stepped into his sight. “Please come in.” the woman said, as she held open the door to make room.
The short man smiled with a bright gleam. He surprisingly looked normal for someone whose into ghosts and stuff. But his smile was somehow weird to me.
“Thank you, ma’am.” Said the man, as he stepped into the doorway.

         I was watching from the kitchen of this house. The woman who answered the door for this person was my grandma. After my mother died and my father ran off before I was even born, I was sent to live with her. I was 5 then, and that was 5 years ago. My grandma had always told me that my long curly, dark brown hair was just like my Moms. That was why I always kept it down.
           My grandmother had called these people after a few odd things were happening around our home. My grandmother said things would be one place, then move to another. She would hear clear voices in the hall, and footsteps upstairs. But the biggest thing that sent my grandma into calling these strangers was because of last night. Something crawled into her bed and tried to kill her she says. She claims she saw nothing there. She felt the feeling of fingers around her neck but she saw nothing. At first I thought it might be a dream she had and mistook it for reality. But that same night, I heard something too.

    “So, Miss Hawkins, I would like to ask you a couple of things before we begin the process.”
 My grandma had invited him to sit in the living room. They sat across the coffee table from each other. I still listened from the other side of the kitchen door.
The short man reached into his big black bag and pulled out an ordinary notebook. He clicked his pin and prepared to write. After he jotted down a couple of things, he looked to my grandmother.
She looked at him with a quite look. “Something is in this house sir. And I’m sure you know it.”
The man looked surprised. He must have thought she was crazy or something. Who wouldn’t? He stared at my grandmother for a while, then he closed his notebook and put his stuff back into his bag.
“Ma’am, I am from an organization called NOTE. You may have already known that however.” The man smiled as he reached back into his bag. He pulled out a small device that was blinking red. It looked like a tiny bug.
“This is a listening device. Lately there have been ‘traitors’, per say, within our group. Strange things happening to our customers, things like that. So, our boss has been keeping an ear open for strange behavior.”
I opened the door of the kitchen with a slight rush, “Why are you telling her that?” I hadn’t shown myself to him yet, so I was surprised to see him smile at me as though I had been there the whole time.
“Well missy, if I myself truly want to gain her trust, I needed to let her know she’s being heard from my people, and they will rush here if anything were to happen.” The small man placed the small blinking bug on the coffee table and gave me a wink.
“Now then, would you like to join in on story time?” The man asked me with a bright, weird smile. I felt something strange with this man, but I wanted to know what was happening. I made my way to my grandmother’s side and sat beside her chair on the floor.
“My granddaughter doesn’t need to hear these things.” Said my grandmother to the man. She seemed very nerves, I could tell because her hands were shaking.
“Miss Hawkins, with all due respect, your granddaughter is a part of everything as well. She may have seen or heard something very important. Would it be alright if she listened and shared with us?” The man was firm but calm with his voice, as he talked my grandmother into letting me stay.
My grandma took a deep breath and nodded her head. The man smiled and nodded along with her.
“Alright, now, little miss, what is your name?”
“Dorothy. My name is Dorothy Wrights.” I looked into the man’s eyes as he smiled at me.
“OK, Miss Dorothy, tell me some things that have happened to you recently in this house.”
“I haven’t experience anything.” I told the man.
He seemed surprised. Which, I guess I understand that. But even if I explained everything I thought I had seen or heard, he would only think I was crazy. Just like everyone elts.
“Miss Dorothy, are you sure you haven’t seen or heard anything strange while living here?” The man calmly asked me again. He must think grandma is crazy. If I say anything he might think I’m crazy too.
“I’m sure.” I answered.
The man took a deep breath and looked disappointed. He grabbed the little bug like device off of the table and placed it back in his bag. “That’s fine. I’m glad that you haven’t heard anything. It can get very scary. I wouldn’t want you to experience that.” The man pulled out his notepad and wrote on it quickly, then placed it on the table in front of us. “Sense this is the case, it’s possible that you, Miss Hawkins, are possessed.”
My grandma’s eyes widened and she began to shake a lot more than before. Possessed? Did he say she was possessed because I said I hadn’t seen anything? What would happen to her now?
“I want to bring over my team members who can easily tell these things. We can be back here as early in the morning as you like, ma’am.” The man packed up his stuff and stood up from his chair.
“Wait, you’re not going to just leave me here another night are you?!” My grandma leapt from her seat and reached over the coffee table in front of her, grabbing the man by the sleeve. “What if it attacks me again?!” My grandma’s eyes began to tear up as her shaking intensified.
The man looked at my grandma with a surprising calmer look on his face. He then sat his bag on the coffee table and laid one hand on my grandma’s shoulder and the other on her arm, which was still clinging to him.
“Don’t worry ma’am. It won’t attack you tonight.” The man smiled down at her as her shaking calmed down a little. She let go of his arm as he picked up his bag and headed for the door.
My grandma stood still and silently. Her eyes were stuck in a gaze and her shaking had finally stopped completely. I followed the man over to the door and watched him open it to leave. He turned around and looked at me with a smile. “Thank you, Miss Dorothy, for your statement. I will be back in the morning for the final stages.” The man then stepped out of the door, and closed it silently behind him.



        That night, just as the man had said, nothing happened to my grandmother. She slept better than I had seen her sleep in a long time. I’m not sure why but she seemed to trust that man a lot.
The next morning at exactly 6:30 a.m. the man returned, bringing along 3 others with him. 2 men and a woman. The woman was tall and thin with short red hair that was cut like a boy’s, but had a girlish twist to it. She wore long black boots with short black shorts. Everything she had on was black except for her bright purple ear rings and bracelets.
One of the men was small looking with short brown hair and big dimples in his cheeks. He wore long black boots as well, but he had long black pants that went over them. He looked pretty young. Maybe even a teenager was what I thought that first.
The 3rd person was a big dark skinned man with a shaved hair cut. He was taller than the woman and probably two times her width. He had long black boots as well just like the other two, but he wore longer knee length shorts. Unlike the shorter man.
The three strangers looked like dark super heroes from afar. I had never seen anyone like them. It gave me a thrill deep within me. I began to quiver with excitement.
        “Good morning Miss Hawkins. I have returned just like I said. How was your night? Anymore problems?” The man who had visited us yesterday smiled big at my grandmother who stood in the doorway.
“No sir, thank you, I slept wonderfully thanks to you.” My grandma smiled at the man and nodded her head slowly. Her bushy gray hair bounced around as she moved. I stood beside her in the doorway, holding onto her pink and blue gown she had made herself. My eyes looking over the people in front of us with caution.
The man looked down at me and smiled his weird looking smile. “And good morning to you, too, Miss Dorothy.”             
I kept myself from smiling back. I still couldn’t trust him for a strange reason. I was better off not speaking much to him.
“Now now, why don’t you all come in.” My grandma said, as she moved away from the doorway, opening a path for the strangers.
“Thank you very much.” Said the red headed woman, who was standing behind the man. Her voice was gentle and a lot softer than I would have thought.
The 4 people came inside, walked into the kitchen and laid their things on the counter. The three people in black all looked around the kitchen. They were acting like it was some kind of museum.
“Miss Hawkins,” said the man, who again smiled at her with his odd smile. “These are my teammates. The woman here is Anna, the short one there is Brick.”
Brick made a face at the man after the word short. I guess that wasn’t something he favored being called.
“And the big one here is Davon.”
Davon nodded and lowered his head. He was a big guy but he seemed to be soft on the inside.
“Oh goodness, it’s nice to meet all of you.” My grandmother reached out her hand and shook each one of theirs. She was a whole lot more cheerful today.
The man pulled out a chair from our table and sat down. The kitchen was small so everything was mainly in one close area.
“So, let’s get right to the point.” The room became silent and all eyes went to him. “Davon, can you tell us a little about what you’re feeling right now?”
Feeling right now? Does it matter what he’s feeling? Aren’t they supposed to be searching for ghosts and stuff? Davon closed his eyes and took a deep breath. He stood in silence for a moment as he breathed. After a while, he opened his eyes again. “I can say there is something in this house. The strongest area is in a room upstairs.” Davon turned to my grandmother, “And don’t worry Ma’am, there is nothing possessing you.”
My grandmother became instantly relieved. “Thank goodness!” She reached out her hand and touched his arm. Davon smiled down at her, then looked over at the man and nodded. The man smiled and stood up from his chair. “Alright then, Miss Hawkins, you and your granddaughter will need to step out of the house for a moment. Just, stay in the neighborhood and return in about 25 minutes. Ok?” The man walked us to the door and led us outside. “Thank you for your corporation. This will all be over soon.” He then stepped back inside and closed the door.


       It had been 15 minutes sense we had been outside. My grandma had gotten the mail and the two of us had walked around the house twice. We sat down on the steps in front of the door and waited a little while. My grandmother sighed and stood up. “Dorothy dear, I think I’ll go visit Mrs. Ginger next door real quick. She has one of my special plates anyways. I should be back before they come out, ok?” She headed over towards the street and began down the road. Before she disappeared around the few trees and bushes, she turned and waved to me. I waved back and watched her bushy gray hair vanish behind the bushes.
      5 minutes later I heard something break from inside the house. It was very loud and seemed to be coming from upstairs. I jumped up from sitting on the steps and grabbed the doorknob. It was locked! Why? I thought I had checked it after he closed it behind us! I started knocking and knocking. I thought that even if I shouted they might respond. But no one came. Just then, I heard another crash. It almost felt like it shook the whole house. Along with the crash there was a scream! I couldn’t take it anymore! I just had to get into this house! I knew of a way in. the window in the basement was always left open! I could go through there. I took off around the house, found the basement window, slipped through and landed on a table below it. From there I ran up the tiny steps and popped out where the basement door was. Luckily it was unlocked. I was in the hallway by the kitchen, under the stairs. Just as I peeked out, another crash came from upstairs. I jolted out of the door and took off up the stairs. The hallway upstairs was short but for the first time it felt miles long. I searched every room until I came to the last one. My grandmother’s room. The door was closed and everything was muffled. I could hear talking and crashes, but didn’t understand any of it. The only sound I could hear clearly was the beating of my heart. I tip toed over closer to the door. My hand reached over and grabbed the doorknob. I slowly turned it and gave it a tiny push. I can say now, it might have been the biggest mistake of my life. As the door opened just enough for me to see through, I saw everything. I saw Anna, jumping around the room swinging her weapon this way and that. I saw Brick, twisting around in circles, creating bright flashes of light around him. I saw Davon and the man with the smile crouched in a corner with blood all around them. It wasn’t Davon’s, so it must have been the man’s!
I opened the door wider and wider, until it was completely open. My eyes widened and I saw the room. The walls had been completely knocked away! The bed must have gone with them too. Everything was blowing everywhere and the air was so thick. I felt it all surround me at once. It was overwhelming. I fell to the ground, hitting my knees pretty hard. I looked up once again. I saw what seemed to be thousands of dark shadows. Is that what they fight? Are those the ghosts? I couldn’t think of much more it could be. The room was extremely loud now. I couldn’t understand how I hadn’t been hearing all of this. I could feel my mind blacking out. Everything was getting darker. I could hear a loud buzzing in my ear and my breathing felt heavy. Before I knew it I had hit the floor, laying flat on the side of my face. I saw the man covered in blood. Our eyes met and his face instantly turned to shock. I could see him jolt up from the corner and start heading towards me. He instantly hit the ground and fell to his face. Davon lifted him up. I could tell the two of them were shouting but I couldn’t hear anyone. I remember the last thing I saw the most. A creature with a human shaped body. A long pink and blue gown that was ripped and torn and bushy gray hair. Its face turned to me. In that moment, I saw nothing but a monster.



        I don’t know how long I was asleep, or if what I had seen was real or not. But I woke up in a hospital bed, staring up at the off-white colored ceiling. My eyes slowly searched the room around me. It was small and had a TV which was turned on. The wallpaper was ugly, and the window was cracked open. What was I doing there? How did I end up in this place? My face felt tight and my arms felt numb. The only thing I could hear was the television. I looked down and saw a needle in my arm. I reached up to touch my face, only to hit a large plastic thing stuck to it. It was pumping me air that felt cold. I noticed beside me a tray of food. It hadn’t been eaten yet. I wonder if it was for me.
Just then, a person came through the doorway. I recognized him right away. It was the man with the weird smile! The one I had seen covered in…covered in, what?
“Oh! Dorothy!” The man’s face lit up. He ran to my side and touched my hand. “Dorothy? How are you feeling? Can you hear me ok? Can you see me? Dorothy?”
I yanked my hand away from his. “I’m fine!”
The man let out a sigh of obvious relief.  He sat down on a stool that was beside the bed. “I’m so glad you’re ok.” He seemed extremely genuine when he spoke now.
“What…happened?” I looked him deep in the eyes as his face became a lot paler all of a sudden.
“You…saw a lot of things. I know you must be shocked.” He looked away from me and down at his feet. He had scratches and bruises all over him. “I…have to tell you something, Dorothy.”
I felt my heart sink for some strange reason. Maybe I already knew what he was going to say.
“Dorothy, your grandmother…she…is dead.” He looked me in the eyes again. His face was very sorry. I could somehow just tell.
“She…died before I met you.”
What? How? I couldn’t understand him. What did he mean? Died before we met? That’s impossible! My grandmother was there! She was with me!
“Listen, the Miss Hawkins I met was not the real one. She was a monster.” The man took another deep breath and stood up from his stool. “She was being controlled by a demon, much stronger than I thought at the beginning. That’s how I wasn’t able to notice her being a fake.” He looked away from me again. He must be regretting some things.
“So how was she a fake? She took care of me like always! She smiled at me like she always did! How was she a monster!?” My voice began to rise louder and louder. I could feel my eyes beginning to water. I felt too confused to truly be sad. What the heck was going on?
“I know you are very confused right now. And I understand. The monster was in the true body of your grandmother. She had died while you were away, I assume. It was a quick heart a tack.” The man looked away from me again. “I assume the demon found her quickly and took control of her soul. Turning her into a monster.”
Heart a tack? Demon? How would I never know this? She seemed fine to me until all the strange things began to happen around her. I suppose all that wasn’t her though. It was a monster?
“Why did she call you then? If she was a monster, wouldn’t that mean she was trying to ketch herself?”
The man shook his head. “I don’t know. Maybe the demon was bored. Maybe he wanted to test some of his powers out. Most demons can’t cover their monsters presents, but this one could. Maybe…that was what it was testing. Davon felt something small though. So it was revealed I guess.” He walked over to the TV that sat up on a high shelf and turned it off.
“Did you kill it?”
The man froze. I could only see his back, but I could tell he was nerves. “Yes. We killed it.”
“Where is the body?”
The man turned around and looked at me. “It’s gone.”
“Her soul, was it set free?” I truly needed to know. I felt like my whole world would be forever torn apart if I wasn’t able to know.
The man’s face calmed down and loosened its tension. “Yes. She was set free.”
From those words my tears were sparked and they came pouring down my face. The tears slipped through the gas mask on my face as I let out my cries. It was sadness. Lots of sadness. But it was also relief. I felt at peace knowing she was free. Somehow, it made it all better.



      I fell asleep after crying for what felt like hours. The IV was taken out of my arm and the air breather was taken off my face. I slept peacefully, and silently.
The man slept by my side throughout the night. He had fallen asleep while watching over me. I don’t think it was guilt that had him there beside me. I think that, along the way, a much stronger force had put us together.


           Ring, Ring.
“Hello?” Dorothy picked up her cell phone as she dug through her bag trying to find her keys to the base training facility building. “Ah, found them.” Dorothy unlocked the doors and pushed them open. “Oh no, it’s nothing. So, what were you saying, old man?”
“I was asking why it is that you having had the weekly report given to me yet!” The old man spoke through the phone from the base house. He sat back in his chair and spun around to his desk, searching once again for the report.
“I told you before, didn’t I? I had to add something to it last night so ill get it to you this afternoon!” Dorothy rolled her eyes as she strolled through the hallway of the base training facility.
“Dorothy, I understand that you sometimes feel like you can get away with things, but don’t get loose about to much!”
Dorothy held the phone away from her ear and rolled her eyes once again. “Right right, I got it, old man.” She added; as she slipped the key into the door of room one.
The old man sighed and switched the phone to his other ear. “Alright, just this once. And why do you still call me that? I told you a million times its ok to call me Dad!”
Dorothy let out a giggle as she switched on the lights. “Yea yea, I know.” Dorothy continued down the long hallway towards room two. It became silent on the phone between them. Dorothy stopped in her tracks as she checked to see if he was still there. “Old man?”
“Dorothy, I have always thought of you as my daughter.”
Dorothy smiled and continued down the hall. “I had a dream last night.” She paused as she tossed her keys up into the air and catching them as they came down. “It was more of a memory, though.” Dorothy reached room two and slipped the keys in to open the door.
“What memory?” The old man asked as he chuckled under his breath.
“The memory of when I met you.”
It became silent between them for a moment, as Dorothy opened the door to room two and reached for the light switch. She stopped before she turned it on, and lowered her hand. “I have always thought of you as my Dad.”
It was silent once again, and there was a glow on both of their faces. Neither could see the other, but they both just knew.
“I have to go now, Dorothy.” The old man said through the phone.
Dorothy sighed, “Alright, me too. I’ll have that report to you this afternoon. Maybe we could grab lunch, too.”
“Yes, I would like that.” The old man smiled and switched the phone over to his other ear. “I love you.”
Dorothy smiled and couldn’t help but remember her dream from last night. She felt as though she had gone back in time, and recalled everything he had done for her. Everything that happened those few days brought them together. She recalled the moment her grandmothers front doors were open, and the short man with the weird smile appeared. The moment in the hospital when his cold pale hands grabbed hers with joy, asking over and over if she was ok. Most of all, she remembered his offer. The offer he asked that night after she awoke, after crying herself to sleep.
“Would you be my family?”
         Dorothy leaned into the phone, pressing her cheek as close as she could. “I love you too, Daddy.”


This is Dorothy Wright’s story. She is like the main trainer at the base training facilities. This is the story of when her life was introduced to NOTE. As you find out, the Old man is her adopted father.
I didn’t have this in mind before writing this actually, it just happened. But I really like it. So im totally going with it! I want to add this into the book MAYBE. But there are a lot of people who will have back stories, so maybe all non important back stories will be separate? Idk.


Saturday, September 22, 2012

Bar Hope?

OK, with this story, I have only writing a quick beginnig. like the main picture at the top of the blog, I have drawn pictures for this story. but i wrote out bits of it and summed it up quickly. so if you read the back of the book, it might show this.
((PS I DO NOT own this photo.))



Story line.

My name is Natalie Cornain and I just turned 17. My life had been like any other; I was born and raised in the city. I have one older brother named Jeremy, Who is four years older than me. A mother and Father, who I couldn’t love more. They were always there for me and never left me alone. My best friend, Lacy Grace, was always by my side. We seemed to always be together, and never went a day without contact it seemed. Yes, my life couldn’t be happier. But…the day I turned 17, my life took a turn for the worst. On the morning of my birthday, January 20th, I stepped into my high school classroom for no, not a birthday surprise, but more like a nightmare. That morning, I woke up with excitement, hoping to make this a great day. I rushed to school, which wasn’t far from home, and made it earlier than normal. And there, in the classroom was my best friend, Lacy, and 4 other girls from our class. Those where the 4 girls who had been tormenting me sense I entered high school. Well, mostly everyone tormented me, except for Lacy that is. They were huddled around my desk. I heard something come out of my best friend’s mouth. “Uhg, this pig will never learn! Why does she still think after all these years that were still friends?” I watched her and the other girls around the desk together and listening in closely. “So how will we get the teachers to find it huh?” asked one girl. “I have a plan for that.” Said another. After downright harsh comments spoken about me, the girls leave for the bathroom. Once they do, I make my way to my desk. Inside, they had hidden different types of drugs. Most that I didn’t even know of. Of cores, I didn’t really know what to do about it, so I skipped class for the day.  This became a big mistake. Turns out I didn’t have to be there to get in trouble for something like that. My teacher went right to our house that afternoon and raised cow at my parents for raising me this way. Or, so I heard. I wasn’t there. I was in quite a brawl with my brother over the phone. “Why did you leave?! It’s just a silly fight right?!” I screamed louder than I have in a while at him. “No Nat, not this time. I can’t take it anymore! I’m sorry.” Why did my big brother leave so easily? While I was away at school, well, skipping classes. My parents got in quite a fight with my big brother. I don’t even know what it was about, what I heard there was actually fist fighting involved. I don’t know where he went, or anything, I just know that he won’t answer when I try to call him back. I stayed out all night that night. Not really doing anything, just sitting on sidewalk benches, and walking through the shopping center, things like that. I made up my mind to head home. By then it was already 4 in the morning, yet I wasn’t even tired. I took a bus back to my house, and got off were I normally do. I prepared myself for quite the scolding from my dad after this, but it was ok I guess. I just wanted everything to stop. And it did…I can’t say in much detail, but that night could never have changed me more. You know, you never think about it but, it could happen to you too. Those stories in the paper about people dying, being killed by another. Maybe not you personally, but maybe…your family. I found my parents, sprawled out across our front pouch. Dead and bleeping. The worst time I have ever been sick was back in middle school, when I caught the worst stomach virus. Compared to then, I threw up 5 times more. I don’t remember it, but apparently I screamed. It woke the Nabors and they called 911 after rushing to see what was going on. All I remember was waking up in the hospital. I attended their funeral, but I couldn’t seem to cry. I couldn’t feel anything, and can’t tell you why, because I myself have no idea. I heard the police say they still don’t know who did it, and apparently there aren’t any good clues that were left. The police couldn’t contact my brother because he was already trying not to be found. I heard somewhere that he left the state. Some might think my brother did it, but I don’t think so at all. My Aunt and uncle are my only relatives left if you can believe it. They have no kids, and I have no grandparents anymore. My mother had no siblings. This was my father’s brother and his wife. I went to stay with them, not hopeing for anything. They seemed nice at first, but I began to wonder if they were alright in the head. It sometimes seemed as though they forgot I lived with them. That or, they did it on purpose, because when they moved away they left a note on the door saying to take care of myself and here is 50 bucks. I had nowhere to go, and no one to turn to. Yet, I still clung to my little bit of hope that my father always said that there was. “No matter what, there is always some kind of hope, you just have to find it.” He used to say. Luckily, I got a nighttime job at a gas station. I really hated it, but what else could I do at this point.

((in this story a man saves her and brings her to stay with him and his two “friends”. Long story short, the guy owns a bar. One of his workers is an ex gang leader the other an ex pro gambler. Together they run the most popular bar in the city and work together to find the girl’s parents killer. Lots of cool stuff happened. This is just this JIST.))

Cursed Knight

This isnt a writen story, and it still needs alot of work to make it purfect and interesting. its JUST the JIST of the story line.






((Other story line: A young boy who is cursed by a witch. The setting is medieval times. Knights, castles, worriers and stuff. A Young wealthy famer’s son dreamed of being a knight, but when he was very young, a curse was placed upon him. “He shall never be able to kill nor wound any living thing. For this curse will make it impossible.” S’all fine and good for any normal person who wouldn’t dream of killing. But for a boy dreaming of being a knight, fighting for the kingdom…it was the worst thing to be cursed with. The boy tried for years and years to brake said curse, but to no avail. He suffered for years with it, but soon, as a young teen, he finally gave up. Years later, he was interning adulthood and would be turning 20 soon. He was working under a blacksmith who made all the weapons for the knights of the kingdom. The dream still fluttered in his heart, but he couldn’t do anything about it. One day, he meets a girl who comes by the blacksmiths shop. A tall skinny girl with bright green eyes and long brown hair. She handed over a bow and asked for the boy to fix it. The boss was away and she needed it asap. So, the boy fixed it. {the boy, the main boy, Is tall and skinny, has black hair and dark eyes.} after handing it to the girl, she smiles and asks him to join her in her hunting indever. The boy sighs and declines with no hesitation. But she doesn’t give up. She begs until he says yes. They go off over into the woods and she sets up an apple. (The boy can shoot things; he just can’t kill or harm LIVING things.) She tries to shoot it but fails slightly. She hands the bow over and the boy shoots it dead on with almost no change of position or expression. The girl is so amazing and gives him other things to shoot. Further and further away and he never misses. The girl beams with joy and wipes off her head cover, reviling a crown. “You must come to the castle and train to be my knight!”

Of cores, the boy cannot do such, because of his curse. But he goes to the castle with the princesses, and does what she tells him to. his plan was to stay low and avoid having to kill something. However, being a knight, battle will come. His curse would not even let him lay a blow on a living thing. So combat with others had to be avoided as well. {when he does try and hurt, or kill, a force bounces his weapon away, and he Is unable to strike.} trouble is to come. And the boy meets many people. In the future the princess finds out and another knight also finds out and the work together to brake it so his dream of being a knight to come true.)

((I do not own this picture at the top.))